On Hysterical Realism

As I progress writing my novel, I find that my writing undeniably employs the devices used by the hysterical realists. This comes as no surprise given my literary preferences, yet it is a trait I must acknowledge nonetheless. I will now take a moment to congratulate myself for being sufficiently mature to admit that I am not forging a new school of literature with my first, amateur bit of writing. I am also unable to restrain my analytical impulses, so I’ve spent some time trying to analyze the meaning and constituent elements of hysterical realism and the hysterical realists. I’ve also developed some concerns regarding the implications of the usage of these devices.

The lineage of my introduction to hysterical realism was standard: Pynchon to Wallace to Eggers to Foer. Despite undeniable preferences between the authors, I enjoyed all of their work and not once felt cheated. The meanderings and microscopic detail are relevant to contemporary perspectives – everything is explicable, everything is relative, and unexpected connections between objects, people, and events abound. As Foer constructs a detailed fictional history of a shtetl, every nuance has its human collateral explained. Many characters are mentioned only once, and only in passing, as a detail’s related effects on a given character are explained. Wallace is able to conjure minutely detailed thought-processes of his characters, accounting for every ingredient of a character’s psychology, both their past and current circumstances and traits. These authors are attempting to create closed narrative systems – every action has a reaction and the stoichiometry of each chemical reaction is explicitly explained. Describing the chains of causality and effect is like defining the philosophical and moral physics of the author’s world. And the integration of these details is elegant – if one were to diagram this style of diegesis, it would appear as a line with a series of loops branching off of it. Each loop is one of the meanderings or sub-atomic analyses, at once increasing the apparent size of the author’s world and showing the course of a given chemical equation.

When I expanded my reading in the genre to lesser authors, in part to know my competition, in part to find easily deconstructed text, I began to feel that the mode of hysterical realist writing is easily misused. (I’ll refrain from mentioning any writers lest I prematurely burn bridges.) The primary difference is that these authors appear to provide details for the sake of details. A gun used to shoot someone is described beyond the make, beyond the model, all the way down to the geolocation of its specific production. Yet that history and that location are irrelevant to the story and explain none of the constituent forces driving or holding together the element’s of the author’s world. Unlike the authors mentioned above, this story would map like a branch with sticks jutting out. Though these sticks increase the overall area of the total story, they frequently fail to reconnect and add to the primary narrative.

This usage of excessive details has uncomfortable corollaries – one could argue that detail for the sake of detail, that is, meaningless maximalism, cheapens the art of writing and devalues the reader. A strength of writing is that the author has extremely fine-grained control over how much information the reader is given, arguably moreso than in other forms of expression. Constantly writing with detail at full bore (pun intended) is like composing music without rhythm or dynamics. Worse still is that it allows the reader less agency. Law and Order, by its philosophy and its medium, is intended to be as representational as possible and allow no questions on the part of the viewer – the viewer is allowed to stop thinking and witness melodrama with absolute resolution and justice. Maximalism ideally should give the reader more to consider; misused it thinks for the reader and replace’s the reader’s imagination. Consider the reader. Consider the reader’s mind.

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  • http://deleted andy y.

    I just wrote about three paragraphs in response and realized it was all incoherent and pointless to what you wrote about. But it was something about the division between people who view film, literature, even art as “art” and everyone else who view it as entertaining distractions, and that you’re not gonna engage the latter MAJORITY no matter how effectively you use whatever devices you choose. You’re basically writing for “other writers” and not “readers” because the vast majority of people care only about story and how thrilling or funny it is, and those who understand and appreciate the structure and devices within the story understand and appreciate because they believe in the importance of literature as art, and inevitably they probably already have aspirations to do some sort of creative work themselves. Of course wannabe writers are also readers, so my point is, as you see, pointless and incoherent. I think I mean, then, that you can’t really misuse maximalism, because if the Twilight fanatic can’t get into Infinite Jest (and they fucking won’t), Infinite Jest will not be read anyway, and those who do read it can see its effectiveness or misuse, but either way the fact that they can analyze and decide whether it’s this or that makes the novel useful. Let me just give you some more superfluous commas and eloquence „„„„„„, blah blah blah. I’m sorry, I read Cliff notes in high school, sue me.

    As for my “style,” I’ll have to say plain as all hell. Minimal, maybe, or just too lazy to fill things in. Anyway, stop being so smart all the time.

  • http://deleted andy y.

    I could have just said, if a novel is written but no one reads it, is it still a novel?

  • http://deleted andy y.

    Not to spam your comments section, but stoichiometry is a badass word.

  • http://deleted andy y.

    I decided I’m gonna spam your comments section, haha. Let’s just write something wildly transgressive and over-the-top seemingly with a message with a fake plot that hooks casual readers, become bestsellers, then write unpublishable epics that we finish through various suicide attempts, divorces, and run-ins with the law.

  • http://www.chinesegangster.com Emcee Hao

    you’re writing a novel?

  • Jonathan Beilin

    Heh, I tried to slip that fact in there like it wasn’t a thing but you caught me! The writing thing kind of happened by accident.

  • CZ

    * reads words *

    * considers briefly, with murmurs of agreement but an impression of dis-ease *

    * adjusts self, shifting weight to right thigh and lifting left buttock; rips wet fart, loudly, into the aether *

  • Jacob Rus

    For padding out a story, Strong Bad has it right: apply a little “triple space action,” add some random diagrams, and tape cash to the back. Oh, and make sure you have a cool nickname. That’ll get you 5 to 10 extra credit points right there.

  • http://www.jonnarthur.com jonnArthur

    Dude, if you want to write an awesome novel, just imagine the story, plan it out, and stop thinking so much about what you’re doing. It sounds kind of like you’re making the story as you write. You should write for the sake of the idea instead. It’s similar to writing a song — you could add all kinds of detailed parts, weird sounds, change-ups, etc. but the best selling songs are all easy to digest, repetitive and simple in the end. I can’t help but feel like if you’re writing with so much detail, you need to add more action to your story to fill in the space you would otherwise use for that detail. That will keep people engaged and on the edge of their seat, which is more important.

  • TK

    *adjusts self, shifting weight to right thigh and lifting left buttock; rips wet fart, loudly, into the aether *

    Do you mean ‘into the seat cushion’? I imagine that would absorb most of the moisture.

  • http://twitter.com/fantasticsoap Frank Irby

    Your writing should burn bridges. Fuck bridges, mane.

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